2025年7月19日雅思小作文8分范文 动态柱状图 注意转折点

柱状图

The bar chart below shows the average duration of housework women did (unemployed, part-time employed and full-time) when compared to men who had full-time work in the UK between 1985 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

题目来源：2025年7月19日大陆雅思小作文

1、题目大意

下面的柱状图显示了1985年至2005年期间，与英国全职工作的男性相比，女性做家务的平均时间（失业、兼职和全职）。通过选择和报告主要特征来总结信息，并在相关情况下进行比较。

2、高分范文示例

开始段 - 改写题目+总结

The bar chart compares the average daily time spent on housework by four different groups in the UK between 1985 and 2005: unemployed women, women working part-time, women working full-time, and men in full-time employment. Overall, there was an inverse relationship between employment status and hours of housework – unemployed women devoted by far the most time to household chores, whereas full-time employed men contributed the least.

第一段 - 分析前两者

All categories of women experienced a dip in housework time around 1995 followed by a rebound by 2005. Unemployed women spent around 7 hours per day on housework in 1985, which was the highest among all groups. This figure fell to roughly 6.5 hours in 1995, then returned to 7 hours by 2005. Women employed part-time followed a similar pattern: they did approximately 5.5 hours of housework per day in 1985, dropping to about 5 hours in 1995, before rising to a peak of around 6 hours in 2005.

第二段 - 分析后两者

In contrast, full-time employed women and men spent significantly less time on housework, at well under half the levels of the first two groups. Full-time female workers did only about 2 hours of household chores per day in 1985, and after some minor fluctuations, this increased to roughly 2.5 hours by 2005. Meanwhile, men in full-time employment contributed just 1 hour per day to housework in both 1985 and 1995, before their time rose marginally to 1.5 hours in 2005.

必备语料

average daily time 平均每日时间

employment status 就业状况

devoted the most time to 投入最多时间

experienced a dip 经历了短暂下降

rose marginally 略微上升

minor fluctuations 小幅波动

significantly less 明显更少

by far the highest 远远最高的

returned to previous levels 恢复到之前水平

followed a similar pattern 呈现出类似趋势